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Cottobelar koto kotha Y na amader mone pore ... kotto dustumi korechi ..... khelte giye betha peyechi ...... boka kheyechi ... tobuO theme thakeni amader sei durontO Chotobela ....

Chotobelar dustumir shorone ajker ei cotto kobita


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Default Posted September 12th, 2008, 10:58 PM #2 (permalink) |
chotobelar kobita jokhon shobdo gulo r ektu easy hole bhalo hotona?

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
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chotobelar kobita jokhon shobdo gulo r ektu easy hole bhalo hotona?

Ditto!!


But tui je kharap ta na!! u r a pro!!!! but ektu easy korle bujhte shudbidha hoito!!
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Kijo -- tnkx brO ................. kire vai ... notun lekha tekha dekhi na kenO oneeek din ?

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mama sundor hoeche poem ta ar ami bujte parchi sundor likhco mama.
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boiragi, tui bhul bujechis, kobita bujte parar jonno bolini je shob sohoj korte....chotobelar kobita...you know fun typer shobdo, jemon, "akdum bagdum ghoradum saje" "hattimatim tim tare mathe pare dim" tora kobita bhalo hoyeche shobdo choice bachader typer hole bhalo hoto...eita shudu amar motamot...

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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RiO ...... tenku mama

Mina ..... eita kobita .... chora na re ..... chora hole oi rokom hoto ..... chonde milaye milaye jodi lekha hoto tahole sei rokom kore khub sohoj vashay likhe fela jetO 8 - 10 bosor baccader jonnO ..... ar eita lekha hoyeche tader jonnO jara tader chele bela k fele eseche ..... besh duuure ...... bujhate parlam ?
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