Sondo prio pathok amar, Aslamualaikum
Boiragita kere nilo, amar chokher ghum
Amar shathe, korse j she, sondo toirir khela
Shoj-shorol vebe amai, korese Obohela
Etei amamr ghum kerese, chokhe porese kali
Pathok shokol, dekhia taha, disse hate tali
Jhanu lekhok, Gunio bote, akdom buno oll
Faka mathe, amar poste, dia dilo goal
Amio kintu bagha tetul, niasi tar revenge
Uporonto sure dilam, amar “Open challenge”
Dondo moder sondo nia, onno kisu noi
Sonder shohit, rai diben, na koria voi
Apnader tore korsi aroj, korsi nibedon
Shochesto vabe, ongsho neben, diben onumodon
Boiragita prio oti, ase amar buke
Khushi hobo, rai jodi dan, or dike jhuke
| This is a discussion on Challenge-Kobitar Lorai within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; Sondo prio pathok amar, Aslamualaikum Boiragita kere nilo, amar chokher ghum Amar shathe, korse j she, sondo toirir khela Shoj-shorol vebe amai, korese Obohela Etei amamr ghum kerese, chokhe porese ... |
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| (INTRO .......) Ghum kerechi valo hoyeche , r ki karbO bolo Kotha beshi na bariye kobita likhi cholo Tomay obohela kora amar iccha nai Shudhu tomar chonder sathe songO dite chai ChOkher kali ebar jodi onno kothaO pore Dosh diOna kintu tar jonno amare Shundor ek intro diso, dhonnobad dilam tomay Jani koto-tuku tumi, valobasho amay Ebar kotha kom bole , nicher kobita poro Dua kori jenO etar tumi jobab dite paro !! ************************************************** *** (adrehab er dewa amar jonno last kobita) Ami naki likhte potu, khocha marar master Bichar koro tomra mile, ke khochate faster Kake tomra advice dibe, use korite DusterKhoma cheyesi, eta thik, khochalam kake suni? Ulto khochai, amar buker, khun jhoralo, oi khuni Humki dilo, k bachabe, palta sondo buniBole kina bokata, amar matha fatabe Are-e, ami sara bokata, kamne din katabe? Doya kore bokatake, aktu buddhi, batabeDoshomike ami naki, boshe gasi jeke Tar cheshta obosshoi korsi, shai prothom theke R shafollo dhekhe oi bokata, boshese akhon bekeKau dilona, karori mon, vangbo kamon kore Moner moto mon na pele, vangbo kisher jore Ghonta jodi bajash amar, montai jabe moreBoloto Mina, ki koresi tar khoti? Ki karone o, voi dekhasse oti? Bolle tomra bodle nebo, amar moti goti.Boiragi, tui kintu bhai, likhe gesish besh Kintu abar vabishna jeno, ekhanei shob shesh Tor proti tai challenge dilam, dhoria etar reshBondhu j tui ajiboner, juddhe pother kata Challenge threade jobab dibi, dekhi tor kamon buker pata Thakle shokti, shethai gie tor, prothom boma fata ************************************************** ***** (adrehab k dewa uttor ...................... ) Khocha ke je mereche prothothom, Sobai seta jane Amar poem pore tomar , gha legeche sonmane ? Bichar keno korte hobe , amader kobitar Dosh gun sob nite hobe , jar jar – tar tar Kobita ki tumi advice niye, likhte cesta koro ? Vabacilam nije nijeY tumi, kobita likhte parO !!  Humki nare gift diyechi, etaO bujhla na Negative chara positive kichu ki tomar mathay dhuke na ? Khun kothay jhoralam ami dekhate hobe tomay Naile tomar khobor ache , khuni bolecho amay Ehh ki shundor dekho dekhi, ami naki boka Ektu chinte shikho manush k, o-he kochi Khoka Tomar moto ami je, korina buddi dhar Nijer buddhi upgrade koro, korona chinta amar Ami kothay boshlam beke , eita ki bolla hay !! Etto boro ovijog tumi , dite parle amay ? Tomar mon vangar isscha , amar ektuO nai Tobe kaw k dukkho diba , dekhte parbona vai Er karone tomay niye boshecilam kobita likhte Valo hobe eta theke paro jodi kichu shikhte Warning peye ebar amay challenge dile tumi Er pore ki uttor likhO , dekhte chai ami !!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~ | |||||||||||||||||||
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| ami manbona.amake badh diye ei rokom thread khulle sob toch-noch kore debo.onoshon korbo(lukiye kheye felle amar dhoosh nai).eththo shundor ekta thread kinthu ami thathe likhte parbona eta hoyna(vishon onnay). boiragi,""kan a dhore 0.28374579594032567648093r7864595905487697538967ba r ut-bosh koro noile .....hahahahohohohoh (khobor ache)  আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি । চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে, সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি । | |||||||||||||||||||||
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Ore amar moyna Seler dekhi akhono tobu Kono shikkha hoina Abar bole shikkha dissi, Shikkhiter borai Har-manbe jene-shune Korse tobu lorai Lorai koruk, borai koruk Likhse sotto bote Or kopalete dhukkho thakle Koto kina ghote Bachcha babu sonar chan Muchre debo tomar kan Ja kushi tai jassish likhe Sarsish onek bol Dhoom korei tor, faita jabe Kali Ramer dhol Shobde shobde milieye dilei Koina tare sondo Sur thakbe loy thakbe Thakbe anondo Ai jamon dhor “Agun” Tatei pora “Bagun” Ai typer likhle kisu, bujhle soto korta Public tomai dholai dia, korbe “bagun” vorta Tobu ami korsi doa 1ta kisu likho Likhte likhte amar kase, Kobita likha shikho Boiragi, Tor reply o kintu chomotkar hoese, 1 kothay darun ami shikar kori. After all dekhte hobe to, ke tor shikkhok. Ami gorbito. Karon satro valo korle, mante hoi j tar Sikkhok aro beshi valo. Ami asha kori, judge ra tor dikei motamot debe. R ete ami moha khushi hobore. Tor kase j hereo shukh paire. Kotha de amake harabi.
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 adreahb ..... ei holo nikalash je kina amar sathe age kobitar juddhO korto ... soo .... se eta keno manbe je take chara kono kobitar juddho hossche? ajke EID er din ... tai kono rokom JuddhO na .... ajker diner slogan -- " JUDDHO NOY SHANTI" | |||||||||||||||||||
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adrehab (October 14th, 2007), nirvoye_nilakas (October 15th, 2007) | ||
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| As This Thread is Titled as Kobitar Lorai, So Just dont post here anythin witout Rhyme. Rule 1: Dont post anything witout rhyme. Rule 2: Any post contains Anythin eXcept poems will be deleted. Rule 3: Try to stick wit the Topic ( anythin related wit the above posted Poem. ) "The Best part of Having a Cancer is you can smoke as much as you want" - A Cancer Paitent | |||||||||||||||||||
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| is this a serious thread?if it is then i am eager to join here.sorry mods for offtopic.bt um seriously confused abt this thread.  oNe pArT kId 10 pArTS hErO! | |||||||||||||||||
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| For Rules See Post # 6. And Yes Propen, This is Serious. "The Best part of Having a Cancer is you can smoke as much as you want" - A Cancer Paitent | |||||||||||||||||||
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