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This is a discussion on **** Chad-er hashi **** within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; ami likhe jachchi amar motho kore..................... **oprotthasithio sukh** nil saree pore sejecho nil pori beshe. bondhu esho amar ghore, aadhare mishe,elo-keshe. j path dhore ashbe, se pathe beli-ful takbe chorano. ...

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Lightbulb **** Chad-er hashi ****, Posted February 6th, 2008, 02:49 AM #1 (permalink) |
ami likhe jachchi amar motho kore.....................



**oprotthasithio sukh**


nil saree pore
sejecho nil pori beshe.
bondhu esho amar ghore,
aadhare mishe,elo-keshe.

j path dhore ashbe,
se pathe beli-ful takbe chorano.
chondon suvash haway mishbe,
rojoni takbe mayay vorano.

soto-soto beli ful,
ekti sithol-pati te chorano takbe.
aalokitho korte shopner mul,
ekti prodeep siore jaliye rakhbe.

r ami takbo chena nodir bake,
nihshongo ekti gangchiler motho.
ami lukabo aarale juchona dekhe,
pagol kora sukhe kadhbo obirotho.

sthobdho-biran ghore ekaki,
osru diye jani gethe jabe mala.
urbe shudhu kichu junaki.
morute morichika,obuj khela.

oboshese jokhon firey jabe,
amio niree ashbo firey.
j beli ful takbe osrute veja,
se ful nebo jothone kuree.

priya abaro amar ghore aisho,
nil-saree pore nio shob-dheher jonno.
amay kache peye se din chuye dio.
se dino osru diye kore jeo dhonno.



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20:11:07eng
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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted February 6th, 2008, 03:51 AM #2 (permalink) |
mashallah bah bah v nice........poem

This is a beautiful recitation of that famous poem,

I love that poem, thanx for sharing
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Lightbulb Posted February 6th, 2008, 04:15 AM #3 (permalink) |
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**shushmita**
(chad-er hashi;02)


ami ashini dekhe,
projapothi danay chok rekhe,
ghumiye poresile obelay,
osru joresilo jibon-shondhay.
.......
sath-somudro prem silo hiya maje,
obosese prem ovimane saje.
kalo choke nil maya boone,
kedheso aami ashini jene.
.......
shunecho kuthao shur-shanai baje,
bashi bejeche shokal shondha saje.
janoki,"k se bongsi badhok?"
setho tumari premer shadhok.
........
pritibir sob sukh ache tumate jeno,
priyo tobe eto oviman keno?
amitho tumake sukh deini,
jani tumio vul kore sukh chawni.
........
aaj tai tumar akash jure,
bujechi amar shopno-junaki uree.
urthe diyeso pakhi k nijer motho,
faki dey pakhi,hoy hridoy khotho.
.......
abar jokhon aalo futbe,
jani uchaton mon tumar firee ashbe.
tokhon shushmitha tumar hate hath rekhe,
katabo sarabela projapothi dekhe.


mir imam
20:11;07 eng
portsmouth



আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted February 6th, 2008, 07:13 AM #4 (permalink) |
I noticed that all your poems have the same elements bcz their themes are similar..
do u try to write on any other theme besides nature\love ?
Say: I seek refuge in the Lord of the Daybreak
~From the evil of that which He created;
~ From the evil of the darkness when it is intense;
~ from the evil of malignant witchcraft,
~And from the evil of the envier when he envies.
Quran (Al-Falaq)
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Default Posted February 6th, 2008, 10:47 PM #5 (permalink) |
nice poem...i agree with asmani api...

onnno kono theme ache ki nilaksh ji

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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