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Lightbulb Boiragi + 1t sonet, Posted October 6th, 2007, 06:29 PM #1 (permalink) |
Toke kano jeno khub apon mone hoi
Tor vasha, tor kotha, jano durer karo noi

Majhe majhe bhabi tui, kotona apon
Majhe majhe bhai bole dakar, dekhi j shapon

Hoito tui hoesis boro, adore r adore
Ma toke rakhten dheke , nij gaer chadore

Firte babar deri hole, ghumutish onek rate
Fire baba mathata tor, bulaten nij hate

Bhaia eshe pison theke, dhorto buker gripe
Bonti eshe shamon theke, nakti dito tipe

Attio r ashe pasher para protibeshi
Tader cheyeo parar meyera korto, ghesha gheshi

Akdin tor dekha pabo, (3) shotti kori asha
Shobar pokkho theke nish, Doshomik Valobasha
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Default Posted October 6th, 2007, 06:39 PM #2 (permalink) |
Nice maraktok kotin jotil hoiche
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Nice maraktok kotin jotil hoiche
Oto pachal parishna
Amar doshomik10 porjonto janishna

Koto dibi, de. Tore nia 1 khan likhum naki?
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Default Posted October 7th, 2007, 04:59 AM #4 (permalink) |
kothin poem re brO ... really awesome ..... chinta kore O paina manush amake etto keno valobashe ...... kolpona O korini ami manusher etto valobasha pawar joggo ...... asole eta Allah er Oshesh korun je amar moto pocca manush k tomader moto awesome type kichu frends der sathe amar cotto jibone porichoY koriye diyechen .....

lotz of love and hugz for u dear brO !!!
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14 line er poem hoilei shegula re sonnet bole na, check ur definition ... basically beshi bhalou hoy nai
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14 line er poem hoilei shegula re sonnet bole na, check ur definition ... basically beshi bhalou hoy nai
ya obviously its not a sonet..but valo hoynai seta ami bolbona...se je likhse ei jonnei take hazarta thanx dewa uchit..ki likhse seta fact na...



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14 line er poem hoilei shegula re sonnet bole na, check ur definition ... basically beshi bhalou hoy nai
kaouke utshahito koresis jebone?

aita j kono sonet hoinai ta ami bujhi. akhane sonet sobdota noun hishabe baboharito hoese, kono adjective hishabe noi, ta khoka boiakoron kisu bujishto naki? jai hok shomalochonakarira amar khub posondonio, G2G te Dekha hoile toke modhu khaoabo
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kaouke utshahito koresis jebone?

aita j kono sonet hoinai ta ami bujhi. akhane sonet sobdota noun hishabe baboharito hoese, kono adjective hishabe noi, ta khoka boiakoron kisu bujishto naki? jai hok shomalochonakarira amar khub posondonio, G2G te Dekha hoile toke modhu khaoabo
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