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Default bela sheshe.., Posted June 23rd, 2007, 01:51 AM #1 (permalink) |
shongihin bhadro masher kukur ki bole tomay?
shunnotar golpo-hashi; azo dekhe shopno agamir,
orthohin adorsho shobi shotti, dhulo die lekha;
odvut dukho zagani hahakar zare batashete ubay..
zodi boli oshozzo anondo, dukhi mukhosher-e prachir?
az triptir nishash tai hoy shudhu khoniker dhupchaya..
bhalobasha kobir oloshota, shobder karigor,
oi gazar palonke mridu hashi zoma kore vabe
shonali logno britha mayay keno ochenar chobi ake?
thoter uporete ba chibuker tile ba na bola madokotay
osthir atta der ushono chumbone khuze fera tomake;
klanti ashe moner chokhete bohu chena shei
purono canvas-e tulir shesh achor tante....
hoytoba bela sheshe....
Are you still selling those butterflies?
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Default Posted June 24th, 2007, 08:14 AM #5 (permalink) |
shobar bujte somossa hoche
explain it
Say: I seek refuge in the Lord of the Daybreak
~From the evil of that which He created;
~ From the evil of the darkness when it is intense;
~ from the evil of malignant witchcraft,
~And from the evil of the envier when he envies.
Quran (Al-Falaq)
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Default Posted June 27th, 2007, 12:04 PM #6 (permalink) |
guys this poem states 1's feeling. mostly explained by metaphors in the poem. the person is sad and he is using various way of describing it. such as-- shunnotar golpo-hashi; azo dekhe shopno agamir.


my fav line
zodi boli oshozzo anondo, dukhi mukhosher-e prachir?-- nicely expressed. kintu liner maje "," (coma) tar ki khub dorkar chilo? i think line ta break na korlei bhalo hoto.

its a nice poem yet i didnt like few words in it. i guess its just me-- such as, dukho zagani hahakar, ubey,
gazar palonke.

but forget about it, no need to be tht sad over a girl. ( i know its easy to suggest)
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