Hi guyz...ki obostha shobar?? onek din dhore my hand was tingling to write something real true...but dint find anything...here's something...mayb Aurthohin...but wants to say some harsh truth...aar lekhata niye khub beshi expect korben na plz...bhalo hoy nai...tobe post korlam...
```^^.:AurthohiN:.^^```
Nisshobdotar ondhokar ghore chitkar kore k?
Mounotar kaalo goubhore aalo jalay k?
Brittishnar ei ononto koop e trishna metay k?
Nishongotar shunno nir e shongi hobe k?
Nisshobdotar adhar bhangte shobdo khuje poth
Mounotaree krishno goubhore alor topto roth
Bitrishnar e kritoghnotake muche fele jol
Nisshongotar amar ei nire utshob kori chol.
Aurthohin ei boktobber prokash
Aurtho khujte chay
Orther mohe onno pothe
Chole shob orther raja ray.
Oshohjo ei shotto na bolay nisshobdo shomaj
Mounota tai bibeker konthe fele onoboroto baaj
Bitrishno shob ortho-bhuk prani ononto trishnarto hay!
Nishongo ei ami khuje firi tai shotter shongi kothay?
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Durnitir rajje aaj shotto nischup! Nisshobdo ei shomaje aaj mounotai bibeker shor!Orther lobhe shomajer Ortho-bhuk jontugulo shottoke maati chapa diyeche amadergolay dori poriye. Tai orajokotar majhe shotter biluptir pothe nisshongo ami shahajjo chai shobar. Nisshongo amake shongo din jeno shotter punorutthaner diner utshob amara shighroi shuru korte pari. Dinosour shodrish orther trishnay trishnarto pranigulo jeno ei prithibi theke hariye jay ebong manusher prithibi manushke firiye dey aar firiye dey shanti.....
| This is a discussion on ```^^.:AurthohiN:.^^``` within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; Hi guyz...ki obostha shobar?? onek din dhore my hand was tingling to write something real true...but dint find anything...here's something...mayb Aurthohin...but wants to say some harsh truth...aar lekhata niye khub ... |
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DarkMessiah (January 10th, 2008), Little Star (January 28th, 2008), mina (January 2nd, 2008), tamchow (January 27th, 2008), Vor (December 31st, 2007) | ||
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| Now this is new for me...yet 16 views but no literal response?? is this that bad?? I thought the last para was quiet gud  | |||||||||||||||||||
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| I was good...but with little knowledge of poem can't express what you have given and share with us. honestly I like it...see i did thank you. Can't judge on something that i don't have knowledge of. Wroding wise you have expressed it. তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে, আপন তালে, আপন সুরে... | |||||||||||||||||||||
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| I liked first para than the last para....... | |||||||||||||||||||
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LuiTsean (January 14th, 2008) | ||
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and Darkmessiah thex for being a newreader of my poem...i havent seen u reading my thinngs...thex... and Vor buddy mayb I remeber u reading reading my things...so as usual thex and keep up wiv my stuffs... But still where is Tamchow???  | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Luitsean ji, ami tomar prai kobita pori....obosshoi tomader ta porte porte amaro majhe modde likhte iche kore...lol keep them coming...we do love your writing tami api gayeb তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে, আপন তালে, আপন সুরে... | |||||||||||||||||||||
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LuiTsean (January 14th, 2008) | ||
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 ... ami jaani aapi amar kobita poro...I really enjoy ur comments...arr likhte iccha korle likho...amrao porbo tomar ta.... aar Tami aapi...o ashle maar khabe...kono khobor nai....even amar birthday teo wish kore nai.. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||