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***amar songi hobe***


meye tumi amar songi hobe,
dhu-choker moni vore shopno debo.
falguner krisno churar renuthe,
chad mukh tumar rangiye debo

juthsna jorano kuno purnimay,
snan koresoki tumi nipitho bon a?
sraboner baridarar himel poroshe,
kepesoki tumi joro hawa khone?

chuyeso ki tumi sadha kash-ful?
hetesoki kokhono nodhi tir dhore?
dekhesoki tumi pal tula naw,
jubothi nodhir bukhe boshoth ghore?

fule fule ura projapothi take,
kach theke dekhte ki sadh jagena?
shurer sagore juwar utay kukil
bolo kuhu shure ki mon vorena?

alta -nupur paye joriye,
hatbeki sobuj gasher galichay?
shihoritho hobe tumar najook bodhon,
shishir chumibe tumar khali pay.

dighir jole katbeki sathar,
aanonde vejabeki tonu-mon?
jolchaya ta muche debe ki,
aanguler sporse jole tule aloron?

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kolmilothay ghire rakhe chaipash.
shawla dhora khutithe sikhari bok,
dhur-digonthe nuyese nirvoye_nilakash.

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muktho gulu ami tumake debo.
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gunbeki tumi ojosro mitimiti tara,
amar hathe tumar hathti rekhe.

gaibeki tumi shei gaanti thokon,
ami likhesilam j gaaner shorolipi?
tumar shure haraye udhashi mon,
ami ei bissho nebo khonikei dekhi.

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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted August 3rd, 2007, 12:59 AM #2 (permalink) |
owo what a poem man . really really good. thanks for share with us
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Default Posted August 3rd, 2007, 07:18 AM #3 (permalink) |
Wow.. really nice words.. really great!
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kewl poem bro ... awesome .... kahini ki ? kake songi banate chaO ... naam ta bolo dekhi .... lol
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