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This is a discussion on ****amar kosto**** within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; ******AMAR KOSTO****** tumake valobesechi bolei bar bar kache daki. hoytho koruna kore sara daw noytho dhaw naa. ami tumakei valobasbo nijer motho kore jekhane thakbenakriththimothar chuwa thakbena sarthoporotha. jano prothita ...

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Lightbulb ****amar kosto****, Posted February 24th, 2007, 09:50 PM #1 (permalink) |
******AMAR KOSTO******


tumake valobesechi bolei
bar bar kache daki.
hoytho koruna kore sara daw
noytho dhaw naa.

ami tumakei valobasbo
nijer motho kore
jekhane thakbenakriththimothar chuwa
thakbena sarthoporotha.

jano prothita din opekkay thaki
bondhu tumi khawabe
nijer hather radha bhoona kichuri.
thumar nana ojuhathe
amar tripthi meteni.

valobasar manustike ful dei
tumi bolo""etho ful daw keno""
abar sei onurudh ""ful naw""
tumar eki uththor "nebona"".

prothita muhurtho opekkay thaki
bondhu tumar phn asbe.
sese nijeke santhona dei
"amar phone ta nosto".

ami sristi korthar kache
2 hath thule prarthona kori
"allah jake valobesechi,
ei jibone jeno thakei pai"

tumi ekta bar bolo"valobasi"
dekbe jiboner sob shur dele debo.
ektibar bolo valobasi
nijeke tumar motho kore gore nebo

ami hridoy duar khule rekesi
jodhi paro eso.
ami tumake sagotho janabo
"2 chok osruthee vejbe"

****ami janina valobasa ki?thobe eta jani valobasle dukko pawar somvabonai besi thake****
asif er ekta gaan mone porse "kedhechi nirobe niye vanga mon,janina keno ki chilo karon.........amake tumar kuno nei proyujon""
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Default Posted February 24th, 2007, 09:55 PM #2 (permalink) |
Soja kotha holo valobasha mane kosto ......... etto dine bujla tumi nilakash bro ?


tnkx for da wonderful expression bro
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Default Posted February 24th, 2007, 10:00 PM #3 (permalink) |
I dont think that love is pain

I take the pain as my pleasure

Nice Poem keep it up
Every fortune has a crime behind It

So every fortunate person is a criminal


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Lightbulb Posted February 28th, 2007, 06:44 AM #4 (permalink) |
*** tumar opekkay ***

nir_ghum raate,osru jore,
hridoye ekakitther hahakar.
montai amar venge gese,
buke dhoshese koster pahar.

prodeep nive gese,chorabena aalo,
aaj thai ei aadhar songi amar.
bondhu ethota kosto dithe parle,
ami ki khothi koresi tumar?

choker joley kore tolomol,
tumi aaj kuthay harale?
srithi nithe giyeso ki vule?
bishader kalimay mon vorale.

evabei kathe amar prothita raat,
parina srithike muche felthe.
keno tumathe nijeke joriye silam?
keno aajo parina vulthe?

tumar sei chitita ekhoni pori,
paro jodhi firey esho abar.
hridoy dhuar khule rekhesi,
priya opekkay achi tumar.


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আমার ব্যথায় কাঁদছে আকাশ,
তুমি ভাবছ এ সুখের বৃষ্টি ।

চেয়ে দেখো দুই-চোখে হয়েছে,
সাত সাগর জলের সৃষ্টি ।

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Default Posted February 28th, 2007, 06:47 AM #5 (permalink) |
WOW tumi to khub shundor likhecho...eita tomar ancholik bashai ki hobe boloto..

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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Default Posted February 28th, 2007, 08:06 AM #6 (permalink) |
Shundor...Nice Nice..Joss....2 tai shundor..thanks for sharing..
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Default Posted February 28th, 2007, 02:42 PM #7 (permalink) |
Hei 2nd one also koool
nice job Nirvoy
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So every fortunate person is a criminal


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