এখানে আলো নেই,
কারণ আমি অন্ধকার কেড়ে নিয়েছি।
আলো মানেই ভেজাল চাঁদ,
আলো মানেই প্রতারক তারা,
নির্লজ্জ জলজল।
রহস্য ছাড়া ভালো আছে ওরা।
ওই আলো আমি নিবো না।
ওই আলোকে দিবো না আমার ছায়ার শরীর,
আলো শুনুক কানে,
আমি চোখে দেখবো না।
আমার আড়াল আমার সামনেই নগ্ন হোক,
আহত অন্ধকারে।
| This is a discussion on Alo, Ondhokar ebong Ami within the Poems forums, part of Arts & Literature category; এখানে আলো নেই, কারণ আমি অন্ধকার কেড়ে নিয়েছি। আলো মানেই ভেজাল চাঁদ, আলো মানেই প্রতারক তারা, নির্লজ্জ জলজল। রহস্য ছাড়া ভালো আছে ওরা। ওই আলো আমি নিবো না। ওই আলোকে ... |
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 Im not really the material who can understand the inner meaning of a poem. The Words sounds good though I have a feeling that u have something more "inside" the poem. If so, Can u explain it better ? "The Best part of Having a Cancer is you can smoke as much as you want" - A Cancer Paitent | |||||||||||||||||||
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| First of all, thanks a lot for reading.  There is an eternal conflict between known and unknown. My poem reflects upon that conflict which has been projected through symbolic representation of light and darkness. Man, as long as he lives, is immortal. One minute before his death he shall be immortal. But one minute later, God wins. | |||||||||||||||||||
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| Now it seems a bit more clearer to Me. Thanks for explaining. "The Best part of Having a Cancer is you can smoke as much as you want" - A Cancer Paitent | |||||||||||||||||||
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| nice poem man keep lekhing and suplaing doshomik, we r readin we r enjoin hehel olz. really nice poem mate.  | |||||||||||||||||||
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| chomotkar  তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে, আপন তালে, আপন সুরে... | |||||||||||||||||||||
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| Shobaike oshesh dhonnobaad! Man, as long as he lives, is immortal. One minute before his death he shall be immortal. But one minute later, God wins. | |||||||||||||||||||
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| bit complecated, and much more darker after xpalining  but got some nice and strong bangla word. thanx. don't get hurt, actually i don't get those stuffs (poems).  Ŵe čơme 2 ЃΘΛξ ήoT βy fϊήδϊnG ά pЁЯfξςT Person, bΰt βy ЃέaЯήϊnG 2 sέe aή ϊmpέЯfЁcT pξЯsόή pЁЯfξςTЃy. | |||||||||||||||||||
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