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Default adrehab + kathal pata, Posted October 13th, 2007, 01:23 AM #1 (permalink) |
Dhaka Is Kathaler Shohor
kathal er nai je khobor
Rojar dine e din raat tar
kathal patai chai
dhakay tai kathal pata nai

char paye te dariye theke
moner sukhe chibay se je
thutni te tar shamanno dari
bhuri ta tar bishal hari
ba ba bole shur kore bole
"amar kathal pata chai" [translation]

10 line er chora guli
boshe lekhe rashi rashi
sonnet bole chalay shob e
sesh porjonto kagoj guli
tar e pete jay ...



*nods*
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Default Posted October 13th, 2007, 08:36 AM #2 (permalink) |
khwl........valoy laglo poem da poira. amnitai dhk ke emi personally missssssss korchi.........oooonnnnek,thanx man.

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Default Posted October 13th, 2007, 03:21 PM #3 (permalink) |
hhaahahahahah ....adreahb ... koi gela? ..... asho asho ..... dekhe jaO ..... severus tomake kotto shundor gift diyeche ...... ami r ki likhbO tomake niye ....... lol
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khaiche bro apnio dekchi poem likhen sundor i cooool
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Mashallah, Severus. I like ur enthusiasm about poetry.
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Default Posted October 14th, 2007, 11:15 AM #6 (permalink) |
Seriously, Kothin Rap hoise Severus Snape.
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Kash, adrehab, Severus and Boiragi Rap korto Poem (!) gulo
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Default Posted October 14th, 2007, 01:21 PM #7 (permalink) |
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Dhaka Is Kathaler Shohor
kathal er nai je khobor
Rojar dine e din raat tar
kathal patai chai
dhakay tai kathal pata nai

char paye te dariye theke
moner sukhe chibay se je
thutni te tar shamanno dari
bhuri ta tar bishal hari
ba ba bole shur kore bole
"amar kathal pata chai" [translation]

10 line er chora guli
boshe lekhe rashi rashi
sonnet bole chalay shob e
sesh porjonto kagoj guli
tar e pete jay ...



*nods*
Va, va shudhu
Korlei hoyna
Kobita production

Tobe bhai
Diesis valoi
Nijer introduction(Dhakai to tui thakish amina)

Toke kano
Valobashi tobu
Ebar sheta boli

Korbanir Eide
Inshah Allah
Tokei debo boli

(1 jon bishishto Alemer mote “Prio jinish korbani dear Souab beshi”)
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Hihihihihi. Cant wait to see Severus's reply. Though i guess he will not say Anything.
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Korbanir Eide
Inshah Allah
Tokei debo boli

(1 jon bishishto Alemer mote “Prio jinish korbani dear Souab beshi”)
Chagol Dirghosaash fele Koshai ke Bole
"Ei Korbani te Sure Boli Diboi Toke."
Koshai hashiya takay obola pranir tore
Aor beshi kathal pata khaite dey take


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Hihihihihi. Cant wait to see Severus's reply. Though i guess he will not say Anything.
u think so ?


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Default Posted October 15th, 2007, 10:09 PM #10 (permalink) |
i think this thread shud be deleted.

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