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Wink adrehab + 24 line :P, Posted October 10th, 2007, 11:38 PM #1 (permalink) |
** Adrehab k amar prothom Upohar (warning) **








Nick je tar adrehab

Chondo melaY misty

Dekhe ami obak hoi

Odvuut ei sristy




Lekha likhi te valo Y potu

Khocha marte master

Vul kore kichu bole felle-O

Use kore na duster




Kobita diye khoma chay

Kobita diye khochay

Porecho bacha ebar amar hate

DekhbO ke tomake bachay




Kew k se je apni bolena

Bole shudhu tui

Chinta kori or matha fataye

Kothay seta thui




Kotha diye se doshomike

Bosheche je Jeke

Shondeho nai paliyeche se

Pagla garod theke




Oi mia tumi sabdhan theko

Vengona karO monta

Naile ami dicci kotha

BajabO tomar ghonta !!!!




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Default Posted October 11th, 2007, 03:00 AM #2 (permalink) |
hahahahaha.. now where is this adrehab ... he shld read it...
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EvEr SiNcE yOu WaLkEd In2 mY lIfE, dReAmS eNvY mY rEaLTy..
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Default Posted October 11th, 2007, 03:51 AM #3 (permalink) |
hahahahaha another chorai chorai fata fati....good start mittu...i can't wait to see Ehab's reply.

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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Default Posted October 11th, 2007, 04:09 AM #4 (permalink) |
vaggo valo adrehab eta ekhon dekheni ... na hole or to rater ghum haram hoye jeto
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Default Posted October 11th, 2007, 07:08 PM #5 (permalink) |
lol lol lol

niiiiiiiiiiice
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lol...
rehab_ferot ki already eitar reply dise???if not, then he must be coming up wit something BIG...
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That's right...dekchona oh je thanks diye palaiche...tar mane or mathai ekhon bhoot chapche boiragir mathai bari deya rjonne....lol

তাই রিমঝীম সে কেঁদে চলে, আপন সুরে আপন তালে

সেই বৃষ্টি আজ কাঁদায় আমাকে, জাগিয়ে তুলে সে স্মৃতিটাকে
কোনো একদিন তুমি কেঁদেছিলে, এই আমার দুটি হাত ধরে
বলেছিলে কভু দূরে না হাড়াতে, অথচ কখন যেন
নিজে হারালে আমায় একা ফেলে, তাই কেঁদে চলে বৃষ্টি আপন সুরে,
আপন তালে, আপন সুরে...

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Default 3 dimensional jobab, Posted October 12th, 2007, 12:41 PM #8 (permalink) |
3 dimensional jobab
or protiti parar jobab dilam, amar para vs para mile porle moja beshi pabe


Ami naki likhte potu, khocha marar master
Bichar koro tomra mile, ke khochate faster
Kake tomra advice dibe, use korite Duster


Khoma cheyesi, eta thik, khochalam kake suni?
Ulto khochai, amar buker, khun jhoralo, oi khuni
Humki dilo, k bachabe, palta sondo buni


Bole kina bokata, amar matha fatabe
Are-e, ami sara bokata, kamne din katabe?
Doya kore bokatake, aktu buddhi, batabe


Doshomike ami naki, boshe gasi jeke
Tar cheshta obosshoi korsi, shai prothom theke
R shafollo dhekhe oi bokata, boshese akhon beke


Kau dilona, karori mon, vangbo kamon kore
Moner moto mon na pele, vangbo kisher jore
Ghonta jodi bajash amar, montai jabe more


Boloto Mina, ki koresi tar khoti?
Ki karone o, voi dekhasse oti?
Bolle tomra bodle nebo, amar moti goti.


Boiragi, tui kintu bhai, likhe gesish besh
Kintu abar vabishna jeno, ekhanei shob shesh
Tor proti tai challenge dilam, dhoria etar resh


Bondhu j tui ajiboner, juddhe pother kata
Challenge threade jobab dibi, dekhi tor kamon buker pata
Thakle shokti, shethai gie tor, prothom boma fata

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Default Posted October 12th, 2007, 03:42 PM #9 (permalink) |
Sounds Lyk a Rap Fight. LoL.
Boiragi is rappin 5 lyns and then Adrehab sang 3 lyns. LoL. Tryin rappin this things out loud, will b even MORE fun.
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Heya frendz ... wanna c more fighting wiv poems between BoIRaGi & adrehab ? ......


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