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Question What is " CHOTURTHOK " poem ??, Posted October 10th, 2007, 10:43 PM #1 (permalink) |


Recently i knew about a new type of poem called



"Choturthok kobita"




Do u have any idea on this type poem ?



if so the plz let us noe ......



waiting ..........
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Default Khub e shonkhipto Bakhya: Chaturthak kobita, Posted October 11th, 2007, 01:13 AM #2 (permalink) |
Chaturthak , e shobdota ekdom notun , even ami onek langs er dictionary te english ta khujechi (bangla te to nai ee) , jai hok , Chaturthak shobdotar shomash jodi bisleshon kora jay tahole jeta daray seta holo " Chaturtho e(4) okkya(mukti) pay jaha. ei Chaturthak" shobdotakei ami beche niyechi kabbyo jogoter ei notun rooper namkorone. "Chaturthak kobita" te shorbo-shakullye ache 20 ta line/verse/pongti. Chaturthak er prothom para te ache 4 ta line. ei 4 ta line toiri hoy matrikota(dimensional aspects) theke . egulo holo doirgho,prostho,uchyota ebong shomoy. amra shobai doirgho , prostho, uchyota. shukhyo kingba sthulo jevabei boli na keno , r ekta matri(dimension) kintu aboshyik vabe theke jachye , r sheta holo shomoy . ( shomoy er bepare amar explanation onek dirgho , tai likhte oparogota prokash korchi ekhane) , jodio boi e likhechi kichuta .

jai hok

Chaturthak e shorbo-shakullye ache 5 ta para , protita para , 4 line er shu-shongobodhyo kobita er roop.

ashun ektu Chaturthak er rules e drishti dei

Prothom line er bisleshon(re-solution) hobe ditiyo(2nd) para te

Ditiyo line er bisleshon(re-solution) hobe , tritiyo(3rd) para te

Tritiyo line er bisleshon (re-solution) hobe , choturtho para te

Choturtho line er bisleshon (re-solution) hobe , ponchom , orthat shesh para te

2nd parar sharmormo(theme) milito(merge) hobe , 3rd para te

2nd+3rd para er sharmormo(theme) milito(merge) hobe 4th para te

2nd+3rd+4th para er sharmormo(theme) milito(merge) hobe 5th para te

ebong 5th para er last line hobe , ekta "chaturthak" er shomapti-shuchok line

ebong , je kothati na bollei noy , protita para e ek ekti shoyong-shompurno kobita.

apnader shubidharthe je "Chaturthak kobita" mane "Opottyo" , jeta ekhane post korechi , setar kichuta explanation dite shocheshto hochyi.

tara agomon kore ashtei thake shikor(root) beye beye ( it indicates the "doirgho" , because "genetics er dhara ki shikor er sathe tulona kora jay na "?)

tara name oshthadhorer nigurho uttyape(oshtho ebong odhor ke jodi apni shukhyo vabe bisleshon , kingba pojobekhyon koren , tahole apnar mostishke "prostho" bishoyok ekta sense eshe jabe "(its the "upoma" ;production system of life )

tara rekhe ashe porichoy(identification) , shudrirho asmaner shuuchyo boloye( it indicates the "uchyota")

tara porichoy nie ashe tomader madhyome , jodio tara tomader noy(q. tara kokhon porichoy nie ashe? ans. jokhon tomader ke madhyom(medium) hishebe pay, which indicates the "shomoy")

er por rules onujayi bisleshito+merge hote thakbe , ebong 5th para er last line e gota "chaturthak" shesh hobe"

Aj eituku e , r ekdin "Chaturthak " er mathmatical explanation deoar ichye rakhi.

waiting for ur reply

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Default Posted October 11th, 2007, 03:46 AM #3 (permalink) |
Onek kichu shiklam, janlam. Eitar moto thik English ekta category ache tai na? apni nishchoi bhalo janben...bolben ki? amar thik mone porchena..

eto dhorjo dhore amader meaning bujhanor jonno apnake onek onek dhonnobad!

apnar mathamtically explantion er jonno opekkhai roilam...

bhalo thakben

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Default Posted October 11th, 2007, 11:57 AM #4 (permalink) |
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Onek kichu shiklam, janlam. Eitar moto thik English ekta category ache tai na? apni nishchoi bhalo janben...bolben ki? amar thik mone porchena..

eto dhorjo dhore amader meaning bujhanor jonno apnake onek onek dhonnobad!

apnar mathamtically explantion er jonno opekkhai roilam...

bhalo thakben


Prothome reply er jonnye dhonnyobad janai . ekta kotha na bollei noy , amar jana mote , ekhon porjonto bangla chara r

kono language ei e dhoroner kono procheshta r keu chalan ni. Kobitar upor e dhoroner nirikhya , eta shudhu matro bangla

tei chalano hoyeche , r e procheshta "sriman sazzad" mane ami chaliechi bole kinchit "turio turio onubhuti " te je ami dube

jai na , sheta bolle nehayet kom e bola hobe ; tobuo beshi bole luv ki ? likhe anondo pai, shetai ki mukhyo noy? obosho apni

jodi jene thaken , r amake jodi janan tahole kritoggyo thakbo.

Bhalo thakben , dua korben

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Onek kichu shiklam, janlam. Eitar moto thik English ekta category ache tai na? apni nishchoi bhalo janben...bolben ki? amar thik mone porchena..

eto dhorjo dhore amader meaning bujhanor jonno apnake onek onek dhonnobad!

apnar mathamtically explantion er jonno opekkhai roilam...

bhalo thakben

Apni ki sonnet er kotha bolchilen? jodi sonnet er kotha bole thaken , tahole kichuta mil paoa jete pare , as jodi apni "chaturthak" likhte chan , tahole apnake "sonnet" likhate hat smooth thakte hobe. Sonnet: ei format of poetry invent koren italian poet "petrark" , bangla shahittye prothom sonnet or chaturdosh podi kobita nie ashen "mohakobi Michele Modhushudon Dutt"

Chaturthak Kobita kokhono e "sonnet " er moto/category te pore na"

Explanation:

1."sonnet" shunirdishto shobder boundary nie matha ghamay, on the other hand "chaturthak" e shobder boundary nei.

2."sonnet" e ekti vaber shuru ebong shesh hoy , on the other hand "chaturthak" e ekti vab continuous basis e resoluted abong merge hote thake

3. "sonnet" e "ontyomil" er bepare kothin onushashon ache , "chaturthak" e "ontyomil" er bepare kono kichu bola hoy ni .

4."sonnet" er utpottyi "science" related i mean 4th dimensional hobe kina , shey bepare kono dolil-dostabez paoa jay ni . "chaturthak" likhte hole , u must have to maintain the four dimensional thinking stricly.

5."sonnet" 14 line er jemon ache , temon e amar jana mote 18 line ero ache (reference : sufi motahar hossain er sonnet". "chaturthak" er khetre obosho e obosho e apnake 20 line er boundary mante hobe.

r o onek kichu bolar chilo umm.. mathay ashche na , ele alochona korbo asha rakhi

apni "chaturthak" er bepare jante cheyechen , ami anondito bodh korchi. apnake dhonnyobad .

jodi r o jante chan amake ask korte paren any time.

thankz again for replying

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